It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
A modern world full of bizarre comics hero characters or their contemporary fiction book paragons of heroism raises a relevant question is there a someone who we can call a real hero? Prompt suggests that there are left no true living heroes and hardly there will be any. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly disagree with the statement that there are no heroes left, for the following reasons below.
To begin, today's controversial society definitely has enough living heroes not to mention such names as Dalai Lama, Nelson Mandela, recent history heroes like Martin Luther King. All of these personas' completed monumental tasks, either emancipating the entire nation or by opposing to the injustices of their milieu. By far those people can be called heroes, in my opinion, because they've dedicated their entire life for the well-being of the community, race and nation. This devoutness to the idea and the sacrifices they've made, must be acknowledged properly by ingraining their names in the hall of fame of the humanity.
Further, there is the one more definition to a hero, the person who is willingly and readily exposures himself or herself to the danger, for the sake of another human being can irrefutably be called a hero. Such heroes are almost everywhere, professionals as doctors, nurses, firemen, policemen are everyday heroes. For instance a recent outbreak of the novel Covid-19 infection, which devastated almost the entire world, would've ended in unimaginable collapse of everything starting with health care systems and ending with global trade. However, only by the self-sacrifice of these very heroes, yet another dire calamity left unshattered our brittle world. It's paramount and foremost obligation of us to admire them as the real heroes of the contemporary life. On the contrary, with the development of the internet especially of social media, there is a growing tendency in labeling misdeeds or any sort of malfeasance as the act of heroism. Subsequently, calling them heroes, the name which they're not deserved to be called.
To conclude, today's world is full of heroes renowned or unnamed. Their very existence sustains our world and drives it to the better side, and denying the fact of their reality would be irrational in my point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: comics'; comic's
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'someone'?
Suggestion: a; someone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, sort of, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7371008821 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.167295593 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162362550436 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053562462741 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521016373896 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984840129017 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551648756545 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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