Some people think that education is the only way to overcome challenges we face today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement
In the fast developing world the value of education is increasing day by day that even people have already started to consider it as the only way to tackle with problems of life.The importance of health which is more crucial than education began to be underestimated. I entirely object that education is the only way to solve challenges and this will be illustrated by analyzing the role of both education and health in human's life .
To begin with, education has always been considered to be the bridge for young people to real life .And it is not denying that an educated person solves each problem carefully and independently. Therefore, a person who is knowledgeable enough can contribute to the development of his own motherland like building fascinating study centres , schools or even publishing books which are pivotal for people.
On the other hand,there are some other important factors that need to be considered which are more valuable than education.One of them can be health as it is also a cue to success. These days people with the idea of becoming educated they do not focus on their health. However, we ought to keep in mind that a person becoming a burden to his family and friends cannot earn an income while a healthy person who tries to be educated can bring a lot benefits not only to his family but also to his own motherland.
By way of conclusion, I should recopulate one thing is that I entirely disagree with people who reckon education as the only tool to deal with the problems we encounter in our daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72862453532 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76894428689 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3684859312 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235035761225 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114398443198 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777540742265 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156473301519 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680167865381 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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