You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear sir,
My name is Samvedna Puri, dweller of Haward Street, North London. I am inscribing this piece of epistle to express my dissatisfaction inflicted from the hospitality at your restaurant. Last sunday, my family members visited this place for a beautiful occasion of marriage anniversary of my parents which eventually turned into the most disappointing moment.
Since,it has been 2 years that we are coming this place for special celebrations as well as for business meetings because of the goodwill therefore, it becomes the prime responsibilty of the staff to bestow profund services. Hardheartly, the ordered cuisines were too spicey even overcooked and when we complained regarding this audacious behaviour of waiters left us wondered.
Seemingly, it would be higly appreciable if you could take care of our orders and ensures the practice of good code of conduct of serving facility. Otherwise, this kind of negligeancy would force me to look for other places.
I anticipate a positive and prompt efforts from your end.
Your Sinecerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...the most disappointing moment. Since,it has been 2 years that we are coming thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, therefore, well, as for, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44378698225 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00091602788 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.751479289941 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3342857065 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700313912339 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272356521528 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208716076999 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351492272741 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00518743029244 0.0580467560999 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 7.59969072165 135% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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