In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,it is often argued that governments should pay attention to their iternal difficulties ignoring the situation of neighbour countries in many parts of the world,while the risk of arising global crisis is on top of list.I would be inclined to disagree that this trend may lead countries to unstability since global shortage of food and economic systems tightly depend on international export/import operations.
The main reason why i believe countries should to cooperate with themselves is that in this highly developed era, countries' food industry that covers the demand of citizens require to form a mutual alliance to market the products.The amount of food which is not produced in local counrty may become in short supply or even cut completely off because of the tough situation in another country causing non- productivity in terms of harvest pick up.For instance,South Korea imports three quarters of rice from Vietnam that is crucial to maintain the demand of population,according to Worldcotrade organization.Therefore,I think that governments should assist one another in such tough situations.
In addition,playing the role of spectator is not only option to avoid global downturn.In fact,The highest proportion of government's budget is being sustained by exporting in most of countries around the globe.This ,in turn,urge authorities to help other counties in order to maintain their own citizen's welfare.
To recapitulate,it is suggested to concentrate on local problematic systems,instead of wasting investment on foreign areas in time of economic depression.I totally disagree with this idea because of the global chain in any field of industry as hard as iron already.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59689922481 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46177630684 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.394673893 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 361.0 106.682146367 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5 20.7667163134 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179509159711 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982446451105 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285068003263 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982446451105 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285068003263 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 13.0946893788 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.01 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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