Some people say the Internet has many disadvantages than advantages.
Some people say the Internet has many disadvantages than advantages. Others claim it is always not right. I think the Internet will be an advantage if people use it the right way and the opposite meaning.
Firstly, the Internet is very popular nowadays. Many people have a smartphone or electronic equipment link-up the Internet. Especially in young people use the Internet to the social network: Facebook, Instagram, Twitter,..., and play computer games or look for information on Google that will be harmless if they are addictive. Some students can truant because they spend too much time on social networks or play games, also other people can not concentrate on their work and this can have a negative effect on a company's productivity. Moreover, the Internet gives people access to information yet not all information on the Internet is correct that must choose carefully to read.
On the other hand, the Internet has many advantages in people's life. For example, Google can give people lead to huge information about almost all things in the world with search speed quickly. People can look for and read the news in different countries with many languages. People can study free things: cooking, yoga, a new language, a new job, accounting, finance,... that they want. People can keep in touch with their friends domestic or foreign and add new friends if they want.
In conclusion, I believe that, although there are disadvantages to the Internet, the Internet gives people many advantages that can not undeniable if they use the right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the right way and the opposite meaning. Firstly, the Internet is very popular no...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...al network: Facebook, Instagram, Twitter,..., and play computer games or look for ...
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Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...their work and this can have a negative affect on a computers productivity. Moreover, the...
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Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...nd this can have a negative affect on a computers productivity. Moreover, the Internet gi...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...language, a new job, accounting, finance,... that they want. People can keep in to...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...accounting, finance,... that they want. People can keep in touch with their friends do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06640625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73470701109 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1235145807 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42464698026 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167978880238 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195269352199 0.0667982634062 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31285850639 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134042327478 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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