The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city center made by residents and non residents Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city center made by residents and non-residents.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Leo2109 on Sun, 04/19/2020 - 01:01

The bar chart depicts the average number of car rides into metropolis made by the local and the non-local from 1996 to 2005.
Overall, it is clear that the residents’ journeys halved in quantity while the other fluctuated and ended the nearly the same throughout 20 years
Looking at the diagram closely, one can see that the number of trips made by the residents remained stable around 9500 in 4 starting consecutive years till 2000 when the parking meters were installed in the city center, it dropped rapidly to 5000. Unlike the resident, there was a gradually increase in the total of the non-residents starting at around 5000 to over 8000 and then it leveled off after the event in 2000 till 2002. There was almost no change in the number of resident’s car trips in the period 2000 and 2001 until the Westgate street and Park Land closed to traffic in 2002, the number slightly decreased and ended at 4000. The quantity of non-resident’s car rides witnessed a plunge in 2003 and grew slightly to 5000 in 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the nearly the'. Did you mean 'nearly the'?
Suggestion: nearly the
...ty while the other fluctuated and ended the nearly the same throughout 20 years Looking at th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...to 5000. Unlike the resident, there was a gradually increase in the total of the non-residents start...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55016765651 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.753554156 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.2 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226110034489 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121891829839 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395836413923 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142438974827 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045697425741 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the nearly the'. Did you mean 'nearly the'?
Suggestion: nearly the
...ty while the other fluctuated and ended the nearly the same throughout 20 years Looking at th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...to 5000. Unlike the resident, there was a gradually increase in the total of the non-residents start...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55016765651 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.753554156 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.2 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226110034489 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121891829839 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395836413923 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142438974827 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045697425741 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.