In modern times, people are under more stress than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being.
State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions
It is evident that during these days, there are a plethora of factors causing human beings more stress than they used to be, which is detrimental to their life. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved in some ways.
The main issue with stress is that people are living in a more competitive society and their desire to succeed. To put it more simply, the unstable job market and increasing population have made many people, especially graduates, believe that they will be losers if they cannot compete or earn a job. Besides, watching others become more and more successful in life might create tensions and put oneself under pressure. As a result, people who force themselves to work overtime or overnight to keep their jobs or surpass others might suffer from pressure days by days, which eventually affects negatively to their health.
Nevertheless, there are a multitude of solutions to this problem, one of the ways to deal with stress is finding a healthy lifestyle. In fact, recreational activities such as sports, planting or reading can not only calm your mind for a while but also increase your strength and mentality. For instance, there is nothing better than jogging or hanging out with friends after work, which can unwind the mind and relax. Additionally, governments should create more vacant jobs for people. It is obvious that the more positions are available, people have more chances to get occupations.
To recapitulate, it is clear that the inconstant job market and competitive society have been creating much stress to people. However, the issue can be resolved by figuring out a healthy timetable and more jobs provided by the governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66576940687 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3359073808 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240803591273 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085084572702 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559141910473 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147996928778 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672220564315 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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