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Advantages and disadvantages of using social nets

There are many advantages and disadvantages of using social nets.There is in the social nets we can take many interesting informations about everything we need,we can translate foreign languages which we do not know,we can take any information we need.If we do not have a chance to read a book,we can take their electronic version and read.We can use any vocabularies.This days we have quarantine,everyone should sit at home and we a have online lessons ,if we do not understand the theme we can see it again in the social nets and if someone do not understand you can ask to your teacher and here we need to the social nets.In the 21th century and in our daily life we all need to the social nets.
And there are some disadvantages of using internet. Almost all teenagers are using internet wrong ,they are entering to the wrong and unnecessary groups and entering to the unnecessary and bad ways.Some people are wasting their time for nothing to this internet.Children,teenagers and some adults do not study and waste their time to play games,watch needless videos and pictures.Because of this social nets children lost interests to the studies.
I think that there are many advantages and disadvantages of using social nets.If people use the internet for true ways it can give result,but if they do it on the contrary,it can fetch to the bad results.We should use the social nets for right ways and take necessary and interesting information.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88617886179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31775060833 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491869918699 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.198594957 49.4020404114 470% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.5 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320179338054 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2443090043 0.084324248473 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106904664241 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251145472832 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974059501432 0.056905535591 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments