Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Corona virus is becoming a big problem for todays’ society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as governments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not this days Corona virus are able to appear plenty of problems for our community and due to it, a lot of companies and governments are losing their much money. While there are some strong arguments against COVID 19 cures the earth from the threat of humans and various other harmful substances, l still believe that it is a unnecessary aspect of people.
There are several reasons why people might argue that corona virus can protect the earth from humans threats. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that temporary people are not able to use from fossil fuel. For this reason, cars cannot emit carbonate anhydride into the atmosphere and greenhouse gases are likely to dwindle up to just under a half. Secondly, manufacture will not produce many raw materials and their laundry water will not add in the fresh water than now. Finally, they will stop to utilize from different items and becouse of them, not many egyptians come out.
In spite of above arguments, l support the view that corona virus are becoming more detrimental for people day by day. First and foremost, when humans are infected, these viruses can cause mild to severe respiratory infections including the common cold, and rare lethal forms like SARS, and MERS. As a result of it seven kinds of corona virus are said to infect humans. For instance, the protein spikes on these viruses are the reasons for getting the name, Corona viruses, as corona means the crown. In my view, it is important to keep ourselves from this virus in order to become mobile and healthy.
All things considered it can be concluded that COVID19 certainly has its benefits, but l believe that the drawbacks outweigh them in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... substances, l still believe that it is a unnecessary aspect of people. There ar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n cold, and rare lethal forms like SARS, and MERS. As a result of it seven kinds ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rare lethal forms like SARS, and MERS. As a result of it seven kinds of corona vi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es are the reasons for getting the name, Corona viruses, as corona means the crow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85195530726 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41602027288 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.679108696 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43391442913 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116551779807 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141468439407 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204000950033 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.260288097694 0.056905535591 457% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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