The advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
In the era of modern technology, internet-based shopping is increasingly popular. Most people prefer online shopping owing to its convenience. However, it undeniable that online shopping leads to some disadvantages. This essay discusses both the positive and negative sides to it.
First and foremost, Internet-based shopping assists people in holding the initiative. Customers do not depend on the time that stores close or open. Just by a clicking mouse, they can buy anything they want, even at night. Also, it is more beneficial to shop online because of its usefulness. It wastes about 20 or 30 minutes for stores to deliver goods to customers. Hence, it saves time for us not to queue in hot weather or meet traffic jams. Just order supplies and wait for shippers. Last but not least, instead of worry about having sudden accidents when leaving the house, online shopping ensures that we are safe when just at home and receive goods.
It is also believed that some drawbacks that online shopping brings caused a danger to consumers. In the first place, clients can be cheated by fake stores. They produce fake or low-quality products and sell for the consumer with high costs. Besides, customers can lose their money by buying something just by seeing some of their photos. Finally, people cannot hang out or relax with friends if they are at home and buy supplies through the Internet.
To sum up, online shopping has both benefits and drawbacks for shoppers. However, it is a practical method in the COVID-19 epidemic. Importantly, each person should be an intelligent customer so that fake stores do not chance to cheat anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0293040293 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66845731451 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3421715126 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.65 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.65 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210412247773 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695929100196 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922319410859 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141051918736 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664731798334 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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