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Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
In spite of the unsteady standard of a good government considering the rapidly changing era, it is generally acknowledged that a plausible government is compatible of its running efficiency and democratic administration. Undoubtedly making decisions based on officials’ own judgment can remarkably improve its efficiency, yet in order to avoid bias and autarchy, people’s will ought to be taken into account as well. Choice between these two strategies depends on specific nations and conditions.
For nations with larger territory and population, maintaining steady, which requires high effici...
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Sentence: Undoubtedly making decisions based on officials' own judgment can remarkably improve its efficiency, yet in order to avoid bias and autarchy, people's will ought to be taken into account as well.
Error: autarchy Suggestion: anarchy
Sentence: Besides, with almost every individual's voice emitted, its governor could effectively get rid of abuse of power, which was clearly established by the found of ecclesia.
Error: ecclesia Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: During the Second World War, if Winston Churchill had conducted a nationwide survey to decide wether to declare war to Germany, the United Kingdom would have sustained billions of loss.
Error: wether Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 423 350
No. of Characters: 2329 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.535 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.506 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.021 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 196 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 161 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 111 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 83 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.88 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.032 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5