Advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Owing to the development of mass media, the advertising industry all over the world is increasingly booming. It is thought that advertisement leads to numerous tremendous benefits for people. However, it is undeniable that some drawbacks are also attributable to advertisements. The essay discusses both the positive and negative of it.
First and foremost, advertisements assist companies in making public their brands. For instance, if a brand appears on the VNEWS channel, it is sure that this brand is well-known soon. Also, it is more beneficial for people to explore where they can buy high-quality products thanks to advertisements. Last but not least, advertising, which offers various well-paid jobs attracting numerous candidates, is an important industry in many nations because of absorbing a huge number of laborers. Moreover, advertisements are expected to become a prospective industry in the future that opens the era of modern technology 4.0.
On the other hand, it is also believed that some disadvantages that advertisements bring caused danger to consumers. In the first place, most of them do not tell the shortcomings of the products or even overstate their usefulness. They make clients comprehend wrongly about products. Besides, following the latest trend is one of the disadvantages that make consumers lavish. Finally, advertisements today involved huge expenditure because of going through many stages. Manufactures charge higher prices from the consumers to cover up their costs.
To sum up, advertisements have both benefits and drawbacks for consumers. Nevertheless, both manufactures and consumers have to keep and do not undermine ethical value. Hence, each person should be an intelligent customer in order not to be cheated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57620817844 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26008952179 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8314359272 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2352941176 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186415127743 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513926602513 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675119142144 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103797412431 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466784166779 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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