More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.
What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
Over the last few decades people has moved away from rural areas to settle in cities in order to find better job opportunities. From my point of view, moving people to urban areas and leaving the agricultural sector have negative effects on national economy and on the country. In this essay I am going to discuss what are the negative effects and what are suggested solutions to solve this problem?
In the first place, human beings always have desire to improve their living standards. Hence, peasants in countryside tend to quit the working in agriculture and find job in other sector. Consequently, manpower in agricultural sector will decline which lead to decrease in the production of wheat, rice and all crops. This decline in production will force the nation to imports foods from outside which immensely effect on national economy. In the second place, Increasing the population in cities requires build more houses and construct more building such as hospitals and banks which lead to destruction of green lands and pastures. Apart from it, this migration followed by several serious problems like crowed on streets, air pollution and etc.
To solve the above issues many strategies can be taken. The foremost step, is making the agricultural profession is a profit work because farmer has a lot of expenditures like fertilizer, pesticides and seeds, when government bears some of these expenditures then the peasants have a chance to get more profit and this could encourage them to stay in the field. Secondly, because the weather is very volatile and variable, agencies should provide an insurance to compensate farmers for damages that occurred to crops due to the weather. At last but not least, building foods’ factory in nearby of countryside gives good job opportunities of people who live in rural areas without moving away to cities.
In conclusion, migration from suburb to cities have atrocious effects on countries such as housing availability, air pollution and inflation. So, to curb this crisis government should increase the agriculture expenditures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22619047619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77347100939 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1907529433 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293533560323 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801011910704 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418034155651 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156523574827 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609242198192 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.