More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
Increasing population is migrating to cities, leaving their farms and fields in rural areas, to seek for jobs. Mass shifting to urban areas cause burden on city infrastructure and lack of work force in countryside but this can be solved by taking decisive steps.
To begin with, one of the major problem which this relocation pose is that strain on public services. At present, urban areas are designed to withstand a certain population count because of limited areas and resources. This means influx of people form rural areas could result in poor living conditions for City residents. Another issue associated with it is stiff competition among workers and difficulty to find affordable house. For example, in developing countries, rural people who shift to cities usually work on lower wages and are willing to live in crowded house, causing problems for city workers.
However, this problem is not insurmountable, it can be curved using certain measures. Firstly, the government is obligated to invest money for betterment of society means investing in rural areas is must to provide facilities. By providing job opportunity , better healthcare and education people can be avoided to move to cities. Secondly, promoting sustainable urban development is helpful to address the needs of city dwellers. This should not only ensure affordability and accessibility of houses, but also reduce city sprawl and urban congestion.
In conclusion, while there are certain problems associated with the shifting of people to cities, with the allocation of funds on basic necessities these problems can be solved.
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...cities, with the allocation of funds on basic necessities these problems can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37154150198 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86002689839 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2825975724 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184867511605 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660665755466 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480187803396 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110966392625 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298396471531 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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