Average daily milk beverage product consumption among adult age groups in Canada(in milliliters)
The information given in the line graph provides a breakdown of average daily milk product consumption by Canadian people who are over 18 years old.
Overall, it is clearly seen that young adults (18-25 years old) consume the largest quantity of milk compared with others, whereas the smallest amount of milk consumption goes to elderly people who are over 60 years old.
Looking more closely at the details, as it was mentioned above the largest amount of daily milk product consumption belongs to young adults (18-25 years old). It accounts for 500 milliliters, whilst only 180 milliliters milk is consumed by elderly people (60+). It is less by 320 milliliters than young adults.
Additionally, the index of adults (26-35) makes up the second largest proportion of milk consumption with 400 milliliters. The proportion of these groups is twofold higher comparing to middle-aged adults (36-45) and older adults (46-59). To be specific, their indicators constitute 200 milliliters in equal proporties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2893081761 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79119185082 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6286952323 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310336360188 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125702335191 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544520975028 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185984112128 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437343257194 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.