You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education.
What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Some countries in Europe start to teach practical skills to help them get a job in the school, this kind of class is more frequently for children between 11 and 13 years old. however, it is not for everyone once others students stay in the school to learn general academic education.
This type of education is important because the children can have some idea how hard is the life and they can improve some skills and get prepared for the future. Moreover, they can discover what the profession they want to follow and know exactly what they want to be when they get older. For example: In others countries like Latin America the children does not have this type of education and when they should be prepared to start a career they are not enough prepared to do that and can be confused in which career they want to be for all their life.
In my opinion these Europe's countries which are teaching this practical skills to the children that will help them get a job is an innovation and it should be learning in all schools around the world. When the children only learn the general academic education the most of the times they do not get interested in going to school because is annoying when you are seeing everyday the same thing and do not have a different classes.
It can be concluded that learn how to get a job even when child is important for the child can grow up with a dream in their head and they can achieve his goals. When children only studies the academic education can make them spending time trying to find some profession that they think that they will like.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...r children between 11 and 13 years old. however, it is not for everyone once others stu...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to general'
Suggestion: to general
...rs students stay in the school to learn general academic education. This type of educ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...because is annoying when you are seeing everyday the same thing and do not have a differ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class', 'classis'?
Suggestion: class; classis
... same thing and do not have a different classes. It can be concluded that learn ho...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng and do not have a different classes. It can be concluded that learn how to ge...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir head and they can achieve his goals. When children only studies the academic educ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49134948097 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23197070475 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446366782007 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5540970336 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283268717407 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152356724893 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116635079965 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219930805512 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120842158347 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...r children between 11 and 13 years old. however, it is not for everyone once others stu...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to general'
Suggestion: to general
...rs students stay in the school to learn general academic education. This type of educ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...because is annoying when you are seeing everyday the same thing and do not have a differ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class', 'classis'?
Suggestion: class; classis
... same thing and do not have a different classes. It can be concluded that learn ho...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng and do not have a different classes. It can be concluded that learn how to ge...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir head and they can achieve his goals. When children only studies the academic educ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49134948097 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23197070475 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446366782007 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5540970336 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283268717407 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152356724893 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116635079965 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219930805512 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120842158347 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.