Nowadays, we live in technological life and fast life so it is important to have a phone in these days. It is a double_edged sword that it has a lots of advantages and also disadvantages. Now I will discuss it .
Firstly, I will mention about advantages of it. It is very useful for our modern life because we can speak with anyone in any country they live in the same time. In the past it takes days to send a message but now there are lot of application in the phone if we download we can talk with our family, friends or anyone you know ore do not know. We can call them and see them in the same time without the need to travel in order to talk to them or see them.
In addition, now we have an internet that there are lot of website we can take from them the information. For example, my dad said to me when he was student he was must go to library and search hard to find the book yo take from it an information to understand something or to help him in his study. But now we can find our information or book easily just by open our phone and search then we will get it and also, we can get it free that mean we should not bay any thing.
Furthermore, especially these days we have virus spread all over the country it called," covid 19" or "corona". So, we can go out side and the all of schools and universities are close so they start to teach us by online lessons so in this way the phones it helps us to complete education.
In the another hand, it has disadvantages. in my opinion, it is not good for children because it affect for them it make them lost their time by playing in the phone and leave their study and they copy what ever they see in the phone in social media without think that it is good or not.
In conclusion, like I said in the beginning it has advantages and disadvantages in the same time so, you must be aware when you use it because it is like a weapon, either to protect yourself with it or to harm yourself without your knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... It is a double_edged sword that it has a lots of advantages and also disadvantages. N...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lso disadvantages. Now I will discuss it . Firstly, I will mention about advanta...
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...get it free that mean we should not bay any thing. Furthermore, especially these days we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...us spread all over the country it called,' covid 19' or 'corona'. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...s; or 'corona'. So, we can go out side and the all of schools and universities...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o harm yourself without your knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 24.0651302605 316% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14470284238 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55630089153 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480620155039 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5130229521 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.933333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140699063866 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047602501336 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421569629206 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753836118012 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361741122533 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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