Dear Sir,
I am VJT, i am a regular customer of your supermarket. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the product which i have purchased from your supermarket situated in North toda, Delhi on saturday March 20 morning hours.
While buying my monthly grocery from your store, i have purchased two sandwich spread bottle. While purchasing i have asked to your staff that the bottles have expiry in coming month, is it ok to buy this today and the billing counter executive approved for that. When i have opened that bottles at my home i found that some mold were on the top of bottleneck and it was smelling foul.
As a premier customer of your store, this is not expected from Supermarkets like yours. I would request you to please initiate a full refund of the bottles on priority basis.
Quick resolution of the above complaint will be highly appericated.
Your's faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152866242 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69902908513 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7536006901 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178594059933 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678680689025 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382212340626 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867665345081 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052688390741 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.