You work a part-time job in a company, and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am working as a part-time work as a cashier from the last one year. I am writing a letter in response to the advertisement you gave for the full-time worker required for the cashier position.
I came here as an international student and I was doing my major in Accounting. As per the privileges, given to the international student I was supposed to work only for 20 hours, and hence, to sponsor my study and my living expenses, I joined your company as a part-time worker.
Now, I have been graduated and therefore, I decided to continue my job full time but for that purpose, I need your support.
As far as my goals are concerned, I want to become an accountant in Financial Institution but before that I want to have experience.
I will definitely be an asset to the company as I am working here for the last one year. I need no training and no special instruction to work in this environment. Moreover, I know the requirements of the customers which specifically important to increase the sale.
I would like to apply for the position and I look forward to your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...therefore, I decided to continue my job full time but for that purpose, I need your suppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54368932039 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96836622394 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4634018405 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360452923879 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123626905183 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873432192385 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163611422525 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747244471726 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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