Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The debate among the profession start from the day since the world enters in the modern era. There are various professions in the world which plays a vital role in shaping the society. As the notion demands the importance between inventors and doctors in society, both the profession have their significant role in their respective domains. inventors promotes the adoptability of change in society, while doctors shows the essence of life in society.
If we picture an everyday scene of our modern life with the ancient one, we can easily identify that how the innovation has changed the life of people either in terms of technology, modernization, living patterns, medical enhancements and much more. Most recently inventors created computer & internet on which the world depends on. The consumption and worthiness of this invention give an upper edge to inventors.
doctors on the other hand saves life and encourage the health awareness among the society through their deep knowledge and expertise. one pursue towards the doctor when get illness to have the prescription as doctors serves to save the mankind in society. It is a fact that life span of human being deliberately depends on doctor from birth to death.
Although the doctors and inventors both depends on each other, and now the dependency on inventors has much increased. The invention also become important for doctors as they can make their research and serve the mankind in better way. they both are equally important to society as they both serve society in their own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Inventors
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Suggestion: Doctors
...ion give an upper edge to inventors. doctors on the other hand saves life and encour...
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Suggestion: One
...ugh their deep knowledge and expertise. one pursue towards the doctor when get illn...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ch and serve the mankind in better way. they both are equally important to society a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11023622047 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63797715892 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3707015332 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188708133227 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659926242423 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399598710959 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108464533003 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373403253013 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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