Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, the use of other forms of medicine has been advertising. However, it seems such approaches are not effective, even worse they might cause some devastating effect on the health. I personally agree with this statement and will discuss my reasons in the following.
To begin with, the positive effect of some alternative medicine such as herbal medicine has not been scientifically approved. In fact, there is no scientific documents about the efficiency of those compound in treatment of some illnesses. However, individuals follow the remedies that their ancestors used in many years ago.
Moreover, there is a concern about side effects some alternative medicine. To explain this clearly, some herbal medicine might contain some poisonous molecules. As a matter of fact, the overconsumption of those might cause organs failure such as liver and kidney and consequently might cause death. However, currently, with development of medical science, researchers can purify the effective material of herbal medicine and offer it as a capsule or tablet.
To conclude, although some old methods might be beneficial, fortunately, in recent years, the medical science has developed to improve old remedies and offer new approaches for treatment of different illnesses. I opine people should have more trust in new science than the old-fationes ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48325358852 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95550514216 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1893953674 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122611004281 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504984640021 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462142353268 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810827535159 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468291389693 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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