What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
No one can deny that there were many discoveries in the last century. Some of them have had some advantages, and others have had some disadvantages. If I were to choose the most beneficial findings, I would like to talk about vehicles, telephone, and the Internet. And I will develop those in the following paragraphs.
First of all, at the beginning of the century, vehicle construction was one of the most important things that people could discover for many reasons. It is possible to enumerate many positives attributes to cars. For example, commuting is more accessible than was in the past. In the past people in order to move from one point to another point used to use horses, bicycles or walk. However, after cars have been built, people changed those transport mediums for cars, which made more efficient commute time.
Second, In the past, people used to communicate with each other through mailing. Mailing method had some disadvantages, such as time delivery or missing mail. Although mail delivery has not disappeared at all, telephone discovery changed the play rules. Nowadays, almost any home in the world has a telephone, and it is a useful device when someone needs to communicate some news to another person. For example, emergencies, great story, or to talk about nothing important, the fast way that people can make it is through phone communication.
Finally, the last invention that was made by people is the Internet. Definitely, the Internet could be defined as the most important discovery in the last years. The Internet provides a lot of positives benefits in different areas, such as work, communication, and computer games. It is possible enumerate endless applications, but If I choose one I prefer to talk about working benefits. For example, the network changed my business, I am a writer, and when I put my books on the Internet, I could sell them than ever I thought.
In conclusion, cars, telephone, and the Internet are the most important discoveries made in the last century for all those reasons I have mentioned above.
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 60
- otters decrease 81
- If you could go back to some time and place in the past when and where would you go Why 60
- a new theater at my neighborhood 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9884057971 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82505964234 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9415090439 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.05 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199446486236 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585239194596 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554122996951 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116139146981 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332584409637 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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