The charts show school expenditure and the proportion of students who gained higher education diplomas and degrees in Singapore from 2000 to 2012

Essay topics:

The charts show school expenditure and the proportion of students who gained higher education diplomas and degrees in Singapore from 2000 to 2012.

The bar chart illustrated the total expense on school of learners in Singapore, whereas the pie charts compared the percentage of students who achieved higher education qualification between 2000 and 2012.

Overall, boys spent more money on education than the girls. Besides, there were fewer people who wanted and accomplished higher diplomas throughout the years.

According to the bar chart, in 2000, the total school spending of both genders were under 10 million dollars, though that of boys was higher. The period from that to 2012 witnessed a significant increase in the amount of money the boys spent on school, from approximately 9 million dollars to around 31 million dollars. In comparison, there was a rise in the school expenditure of girls, which was still not as much as that of boy.

The proportion of people gaining higher diplomas in the two pie charts decreased relatively, by 5%, while the figure for students obtaining their degrees with higher levels ascended fairly, from 27% to 32%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1696969697 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67288531107 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2025099092 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410249009236 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156073543917 0.0766984524023 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091848015676 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223183927002 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724930806058 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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