Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include
• What the presentation is about
• The equipment needed
• Suggestions to set it up
Dear Jot,
I writing this in response to your letter asking for assistance in regard to the equipment required for the foreseen presentation.
Well, you are aware that I am dealing with the student visa department. My presentation will be about the process to obtain a student visa. This presentation will include all the pre-requisites, processes, and the time involved in the whole process from filling application for the offer letter to college to getting a visa from the embassy.
The equipment that I actually needed for this upcoming presentation is first, I want one laptop as I will not be able to carry my laptop as I have been given for repair and I will bring the presentation in pen drive. Secondly, a projector is an obvious requirement. Thirdly, if possible please arrange a lecture stand for me where I can place a laptop and stand for presentation.
I have mostly seen that there is always a mess of wires in the seminar hall because of the equipment set. I would like to recommend you that, place the equipment on one side instead of placing it on both the ends of the room. Try to streamline the projector on the white wall instead of the whiteboard I might need it.
I would like to thank you for the efforts you are making for my presentation. If any further information is required do write.
Yours Sincerely,
Kinu
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Jot, I writing this in response to your letter...
^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rts you are making for my presentation. If any further information is required do ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, secondly, third, thirdly, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69198312236 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84779807731 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3848290594 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5384615385 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33697473981 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963438198769 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791737413165 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175802118962 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859427419067 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Jot, I writing this in response to your letter...
^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rts you are making for my presentation. If any further information is required do ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, secondly, third, thirdly, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69198312236 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84779807731 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3848290594 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5384615385 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33697473981 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963438198769 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791737413165 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175802118962 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859427419067 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.