Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation.
What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?
The last decades have witnessed a decrease in the coverage of trees in the world. It is often reported that deforestation has a sharp rise recently, which is regarded as a pressing problem. This essay will consider the causes and results of the issue in more detail.
To begin with, there could be a wide range of factors that may lead to deforestation. Firstly, logging is one of the main reasons that lead to the decrease of trees. Wood is a valuable material for the production of many things, especially paper. Secondly, urbanization due to the lack of spaces, which may be shown by the fact that forest areas have been replaced by departments and buildings. Moreover, a myriad of industrial zones has been expanded where used to belong to nature. In brief, the problem could come from the above origins.
Consequent to these reasons, humans are dealing with the result of this problem. First and foremost, forests, which are known as the defense of the Earth, are losing their ability to protect. It means human beings are going to suffer the stronger climate change. Additionally, numerous plants and animal species are in danger of extinction; that is to say, they are destroying biodiversity.
Another point is that working for some companies makes the employee does have a chance to face new working environments and different working styles so that they could find which one is suitable for their character. Almost all people in this group get their best development in their own way and get more experience for working life. But the drawback of the latter is that the recruiter is always looking for an employee who is willing to associate with their business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... say, they are destroying biodiversity. Another point is that working for some c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in brief, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6391796668 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.941927254 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805878003701 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257336933575 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284156295965 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515467353763 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391088402744 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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