You have invited some friends to come on holiday. You are going to airport to meet them. They have asked you how to get to your house from airport
Write a letter to your friends,
In your letter
-Explain that you will meet them at the airport
-Give them some idea of what you have planned for them
-tell them some important things that they might find useful.
Dear Prem,
I hope you are doing great. I am glad you have accepted my invitation to spend the holidays with us. You don’t know how much I am excited about it.
Since you are coming to Jalandhar for the first time, you need not worry about anything once you reach airport. Me and my wife will see you at the exit gate 5.
As for the plan, I have lined up multiple activities and visit to some of beautiful historical places in the town. Besides this we have also booked tickets for Wonderland and other amusement parts around the town.
However, there are couple of things need to take care of before you leave for Jalandhar. Make sure you carry one of your photo ID with you. It is required at some security checkpoints. I will also suggest not to pack too much cloths, as we will anyway be shopping a lot.
Regards,
Sourabh Gupta
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Me and my wife will see you at the exit gate 5.
my wife and I will see you at the exit gate 5.
there are couple of things need to take care of
there are couple of things which need to take care of
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