Human activities have posed negative effects on plants and animals. Some people think it is too late to do anything, while other people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Due to modernization and over development of cities, our natural environment is damaged and animals are killed. Some people believe that this situation is already irreversible, but I personally think that it will never be too late to take actions.
For all the reasons why people think at this point it is useless to do anything, none are as significant as the recent extreme weather. Due to deforestation, trees that absorb carbon dioxide are being cut. The increased amount of carbon dioxide leads to global warming and heat waves are coming one after another with longer summer time. Moreover, longer summer time with higher temperature brings forest fires that are hard to put out and killed millions of wildlife and plants. Thus, a vicious cycle is created. Moreover, by the result of green house effect, ice in the north pole are is melting and water levels are rising every year. This will in turn lead to more severe floodings which kill millions.
Although the damages due to human activities are serious, I still think steps can be taken to alleviate the problem. One very strong argument is that government can promote the use of reusable energy. Ranging from wind and solar to water are the alternative ways to produce energy which will do less harm or even zero damage to our environment. With these methods, emission of greenhouse gases can be reduced and global warming can be less acute. Moreover, citizens should also save our planet by starting to reduce, reuse and recycle. By this means, wastes that produced by us can be reduced and the natural resources that are consumed can be lessened.
Under this line of thinking, although some people trend to think that we have already passed the critical point of saving our planet, I think that there are various ways to protect the nature and it will never be too late to do so.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...re coming one after another with longer summer time. Moreover, longer summer time with high...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...th longer summer time. Moreover, longer summer time with higher temperature brings forest f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44363095122 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6035044773 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162594162888 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470410409668 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721935398571 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124516728545 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732551799376 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...re coming one after another with longer summer time. Moreover, longer summer time with high...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...th longer summer time. Moreover, longer summer time with higher temperature brings forest f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44363095122 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6035044773 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162594162888 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470410409668 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721935398571 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124516728545 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732551799376 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.