Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argued that it is better to try to improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Never have predicaments been so rife that they are nowadays. It has been argued by some people, stating that a relevant method of coping with bad conditions such as monetary deficiency or unsatisfactory job is to swallow the fact, yet, others stress out the essence of ameliorating these forms of situations. Along with my own view, the analysis of both sides will be presented in this essay below.
To commence with, the life people are experiencing is replete with ups and downs. As a matter of fact, provided that one attempts to deal with all of them, he can find himself in dire straits due to the overload of stress encountered in the situation. Ergo, one should rather welcome the difficulty instead of combatting it and resulting in depression.
However, owing to some reasons, trying to eliminate bad situations is also reasonable. To illustrate, if an effort of improving the situation is abandoned by a person, he will be accustomed to giving up in later phases of life. It makes it clear that he can be desensitized to the pitfalls he may face and proceed in a confident manner. So, a person can succeed in every sphere if he eradicates the problem.
In conclusion, even though improving a bad situation is arduous, it may lead to self-confidence in the future. Therefore, I believe that the latter view is far more reliable. It is recommended that if people take every feasible effort against bad situations, they will be able to embrace a brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...with ups and downs. As a matter of fact, provided that one attempts to deal with ...
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...to the pitfalls he may face and proceed in a confident manner. So, a person can succeed in every sphe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85375494071 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92509880755 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5618673803 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21036894169 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623694861078 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624098540233 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108504213417 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565742792382 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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