Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Some people believe that the olden days were the best in their life because there was a time where people used to talk and share their feelings with each other. However, I believe that though the world is changing we have modern innovative technology and several options to live comfortably. I will be exploring three plausible opinions with examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I like the way this modern world is ruling with several inventories to connect with people and to get relaxed. I have Alexa, which is a device connected through wi-fi and through it we can know what is going around the world, talk to people and play songs. For instance, after my working hours, I was back home very tired then I said Alexa to call a restaurant and order food. Additionally, I asked Alexa to play melody songs so that I can relax. This clearly shows this kind of inventions are much needed for our busy day life.
Secondly, nowadays, women are working out their best and are respected in every profession they are in. For example, my grandmother used to live in a village where working is a challenging situation for women. Furthermore, she was not respected by other men in the village because she was depended on my grandfather's income though she does household things. In my grandparent's period, it was beautiful to spend time in the villages whenever we go but the women were not respected and also they used to depend on their husband's income. Consideringly, in the modern era, women and men are both equally dominated in every profession and they flourish to do their jobs perfectly.
Similarly, the young era has given us quality education which we were lacking in our past days. This is the illustration from my life, where there were no funds even to construct a small school in our village we suffered a lot by going to the urban areas for kindergarten studies. On the other hand, in this time period, there are several schools in a small village where people don't need to travel. This shows that modern time has given not only inventions but also the quality of the education system.
Finally, it is a complex issue with people on both sides. The modern world has given us beautiful monumental inventions where we relax and also we are able to do our jobs with much respect. All these were possible because of the modern inventions made by the people who studied with much quality of education in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72663551402 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53934344513 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483644859813 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8214487797 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.15 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209775036883 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689869960653 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682745761822 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136293492584 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759915435675 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.