methods of desalination of lake's water
The presence of higher levels of salts in the lake's water is harmful to the flora and fauna visiting the particular lake, eventually becoming vulnerable species. The reading is about the methods used to decrease salinity in the lake's water. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author and explains the reasons as following.
To begin with, the reading mentions that salinity can be decreased by desalinating the lake's water by heating water so that it leaves solid materials behind, like salt. The professor refutes this point and states that leaving behind materials will have a serious downside by causing health-related complications to people. For instance, selenium or any other chemicals leaving into the air which people breathe are harmful. From this, he proves that it is not a better solution for desalination.
Furthermore, the author mentions that by diluting the salinity of the lake's water by flowing ocean water into the lake through pipelines and canals. However, the tutor challenges by stating that the local government has not enough payable resources for such pipelines and canals as there are some thousands of miles away from the lake. In addition, he mentions that it is not that easy to create pipelines for thousands of miles. This clearly illustrates this idea is not worthful.
Finally, the writer states that constructing walls and dividing the lake into several components will be a better idea to remove salt from the lake. On the other hand, the speaker mentions that constructing walls wouldn't last long. For example, there are frequent disturbances under the lake's water such as earthquakes which will destroy the wall and mixes separated water into one. This shows it isn't a long-lasting idea that doesn't deserve success.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o decrease salinity in the lakes water. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...peaker mentions that constructing walls wouldnt last long. For example, there are frequ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...separated water into one. This shows it isnt a long-lasting idea that doesnt deserve...
^^^^
Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... shows it isnt a long-lasting idea that doesnt deserve success.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66029186601 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2766549712 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352665725967 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105946658887 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131962904811 0.0662205650399 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208900232946 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722936228805 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o decrease salinity in the lakes water. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
^^^
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...peaker mentions that constructing walls wouldnt last long. For example, there are frequ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...separated water into one. This shows it isnt a long-lasting idea that doesnt deserve...
^^^^
Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... shows it isnt a long-lasting idea that doesnt deserve success.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66029186601 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2766549712 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352665725967 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105946658887 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131962904811 0.0662205650399 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208900232946 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722936228805 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.