dinosaurs are endotherms

Essay topics:

dinosaurs are endotherms

The reading and the lecture are about the dinosaurs. The author of the reading feels that dinosaurs are endotherms because they lived in polar regions with legs place beneath the body and also the presence of Haversian canals in their bones. The lecturer challenges all the claims made by the author and confronts hereunder.

First of all, the professor states that living in a polar region does not indicate that they are endotherms because the regions where fossils are found today are much warmer when dinosaurs lived. Additionally, during the winter season, the dinosaurs have migrated to warmer places, or even they could have hibernated like many animals in winters. On the other hand, the writing posits that fossils found in the polar region indicate they are endotherms as they can survive only with maintaining temperatures to the surroundings being in a cooler climate.

Secondly, the passage indicates that the placement of legs beneath the body provides the information that dinosaurs are endotherms as it suits the modern endotherms structure. However, the tutor counteracts this particular point by saying that their legs are placed underneath the body to support their body weight. Moreover, being legs below the body structure will help the dinosaurs to grow even large size.

Finally, the academician argues that having Haversian canals will not indicate they are endotherms. He also adds the point that they do have growth rings which create evidence of their growth patterns. Furthermore, these growth rings show that the dinosaurs hampered their growth during the cool climate and started to grow while the climate is warm.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nce of Haversian canals in their bones. The lecturer challenges all the claims made...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...n dinosaurs lived. Additionally, during the winter season, the dinosaurs have migrated to warmer ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26515151515 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52356888318 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8066127458 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278499593022 0.272083759551 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101402761672 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117557047382 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169044740434 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745634922723 0.0443174109184 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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