Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In these days families attention is on the quality of life not cultures or the way that people thinking about them. thus having a big family with lots of children is not popular and important like past times. I personally believes this is a perfect change; how people pay attention to things that are effective in future. I will completely explain my reasons in following paragraphs.
The primary explanation is, nowadays parents or oldest member of families prefer to give all necessary equipment to their children and give them enough attention; because they believe that young people or teenagers need this much attention and caring from parents. The education system is different and they future and expectation from them is higher than past and last generation. therefore, families have to support them as much as they can. In this situation having fewer children and small family can be really helpful.
the second reason is, I personally think in last generations big families was not people's choice; the situation force them to had a huge family. I mean by that, in the past having a boy baby or boys was really important and girl babies were shame for family. thus, if a family
Another point that I can mention is, people have plans for their spending and having a big family need to have a great deal og money. In past people not think about this things actually, but nowadays this point is one the most important part of individuals life. they won't decide to having their own family without having enough money or having a baby.
bring a girl they just rather to continue having babies until to having a boy! this is a really obvious point about past times, actually.
in conclusion, I think this way of living and have a small family, wich is important for people, is a really perfect culture and it will help to improve quality of life is society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, i mean, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74461538462 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4358777867 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5001683499 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119777524949 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529094482934 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359102650763 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691571547129 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418417588813 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.