Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that being content with career for people is worth to tolerate unpleasant job due to financial security while others disagree with it and think that because of being satisfied with job is highly unlikely people should prefer having a permanent job. This essay agrees that there is a strong relation between people's well-being and job satisfaction. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that human well-being includes many factors that can be defined through the work which people face every day. One of the most important among them is to have desire to work, visit working place every day with pleasure. This factor helps people to achieve better results at work than their colleagues. As a result, such situation will positively influence on salary. It is therefore agreed that job satisfaction is important part of people's well-being. For example, a recent survey that was made in Ukraine during the isolation period revealed that successful people usually satisfied with their job.
However, many believe that job would never bring the joy into people's lives and have opinion that well paid job and monetary freedom can be used as a key factor to make people happy. As a result, many people work under pressure that leads to stress. On the other hand, having good mental health that can be ruined if people do not like on what they are working is more important but workers ignore it because of salary, sometimes even insignificant, and appear in a cycle of disenchantment. For instance, The Times recently reported that 89% unhappy workers would leave their jobs if they did not need the money.
In conclusion, while the benefits of job satisfaction are obvious, some still feel that people with gainful employment and financial security are happier, especially because of they can not expect joyful job. However, as long as people keep balance between salary and joy from solving everyday tasks they will be content with their jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople usually satisfied with their job. However, many believe that job would nev...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir jobs if they did not need the money. In conclusion, while the benefits of job...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ancial security are happier, especially because of they can not expect joyful job. However, as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00302114804 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46095457193 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2325635657 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387580793359 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127147842806 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951536095072 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243509003807 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564064944803 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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