ome people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of jobs acroos the globe, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial while others reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impacts in recent years. In my opiniom the both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will furthrt elaborate my views for favouring the both trends and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
After analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and the formost reason Behind this is Being passionate about work can help people become more productive. The dedication that ones have towards their profession can help in bringing the best out of them. In other words if people enjoyed what they do for a living, they would become more interested in constantly improving themselves in terms of their professional life.Another striking benefit in this regard Is that being satisfied with the working environment can have a positive impact on their overall performance.
For example, a survey commissioned by the Egyptian Workers Union has found that the surrounding working atmosphere can affect the employees’ decision on whether to stay in the same company or look for another job categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main Reason behitnd this is that Many people work in places where do not satisfy them, Nevertheless, it is considered for some that it is gratifying to count with a business that can provide them with a permanent contract as a guarantee of their permanence in the company. Workers admit that for them that ivital to meet their obligations with their families, bills, education of their kids, and payment of the mortgage. To illustrate further my brother who has got five children and his wife depend on their monthly wages to cover all the necessary expenses and he is willing to sacrifice his satisfaction as long as he is provided with a constant income. Unfortunately, thissacrifice affects his wellness, since the level of stress and exhaustion are high.
Probing ahead one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that some individuals have the opportunity to have a contract in places where they can do what they love, and do not feel like working is a heavy load in their schedules. Some of them are hired for seasonal periods and their contracts are for a limited time which affects their finances; however, others have the privilege to count with a full-time contract and at the same time have the satisfaction to work in what they desire which grants them the chance to obtain a consistent income and have the benefit of not being affected by a stressful job Individuals that can have these two advantages in their workplaces are known to have a more happy and healthy life according to the American magazine wellness.Moving further it is pertinent to mention that many individuals consider that tangible rewards are much more important. Many people look for a job that would pay them well so that they can afford their basic needs.Moreover the ability to become promoted and advance in their careers are factors to be considered while choosing the right job. As a result they choose the security offered by their work, despite any harsh obstacles that they face. For instance, workers may choose to continue in a company that offers them incentives, despite feeling unsatisfied with their policy. Apart from the freason mentioned Above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend.
To recapitulate,according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the job satisfaction and job security play crucial role in individuals life where these two notions refer a job in certain manners to employees.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 7.30460921844 356% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 24.0651302605 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3235.0 1615.20841683 200% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 628.0 315.596192385 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15127388535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00598923014 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87537248856 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 176.041082164 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493630573248 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 996.3 506.74238477 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.826618389 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.294117647 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9411764706 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197393379346 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064721425632 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641207816299 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134959055694 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523475218511 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 78.4519038076 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 7.30460921844 356% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 24.0651302605 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3235.0 1615.20841683 200% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 628.0 315.596192385 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15127388535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00598923014 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87537248856 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 176.041082164 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493630573248 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 996.3 506.74238477 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.826618389 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.294117647 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9411764706 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197393379346 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064721425632 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641207816299 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134959055694 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523475218511 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 78.4519038076 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.