Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that employees are constantly conflicted with the thoughts of job security and job satisfaction. While some people say that being content with your job takes precedence over the security of having a job, others argue that having a job is better than being happy with your job. I completely agree with the latter argument. This essay will bolster my opinion by discussing both sides of the topic.
Firstly, being content with your job has always played an important role when a person wants to grow in their profession. That is employees who love what they do have a growing zeal to excel at it. This allows them to upgrade their skills to stand out from the crowd. As a result the make a better life for themselves by growing professionally. For example a study conducted by the university of Florida showed that employees who were happy with their jobs had a 72% chance to be promoted in comparison to their peers who had 28% chance to be promoted.
That being said, job security on the other hand ensures that ones basic needs are always met through a guaranteed source of income. To elaborate, a person needs money to meet his / her daily needs such as food, clothing and shelter. These needs can only be obtained through financial resources provided by an employment. For example, if a person needs something as basic as bread he/she would need a minimum wage job which they may not necessarily like. Thus it is my opinion that job security takes priority in comparison to job satisfaction, since the former guarantees basic needs.
To summarize, although job satisfaction provides a way for people to grow, job security ensures that one can meet their basic needs to survive. Hence in my opinion job guarantee outweighs job satisfaction.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81907894737 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63582088417 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9518262126 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338901645977 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114387111281 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117422812155 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237388225365 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120187618412 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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