Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are valuable all over the world. Although these days people do not care about them.
In my perspective, people should appreciate them, but they do not do it. They think many facts are affected them to be invisible in society. I am going to mention a couple of reasons.
Firstly, technology is developing day by day, and online learning, electronic books, and some other facilities are the main reasons which make teachers less valuable.
For example, one of my friends did not like to attend the lecture in college; however, attending to lecture obligated so his executes were that the teacher doesn't teach very well in class. It's better to download some eLearning videos and follow that. His results were much better than us who have been attended lectures on those days. That's why he always believed that teachers don't commit these days. That's why they don't teach well. May be If they have earned more money, they will spend more energy.
Secondly, as the population increase, the teacher's population grows too. When we have many specialists in a filed; As a result, their value gets decreases, which isn't a good thing to happen, but it is happening. For instance, many teachers apply to a university, but only some of them will be taken, and because of competition, they accept the position even at a low price; however, it doesn't fare. In addition to that, they might be happy to be accepted by the department, but they brought down their value as a teacher. They work hard without enough money. The result will be less work after a while.
Thirdly, teachers don't spend that much energy as before. No one knows why, but maybe because they think online resources are there for students, and they can use them without needing to be helpful in class. One of my friends told me since my professor recognized that there is a guy on YouTube to teach the subject well, he doesn't spend energy and time teaching us the subject well. As a result, students don't appreciate him.
To sum up, appreciation is indeed fewer todays for teachers, but it depends on them. If teachers start to be active again with commitment, so again, people will obey them as before.
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- tpo38 task1
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74338624339 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43562881612 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.089347254 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7083333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169081024256 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480963549256 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333873975427 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784230055442 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242933790247 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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