Dear Mr. Micheal
I am Kathy Long, your neighbour, staying in house No. 802. I am writing this letter to apologise to you for the noise problem, that you had to face for the past week due to the renovation going on in my house.
As there has been a lot of activity like demolition, shifting furniture and installing cabinets are in the phase of renovation, and it is creating a lot of noise, which i did not took into consideration priorly. So to overcome this situation I have listed few points which i am going to implement soon.
1. I will do the moving part swiftly and slowly and would try to avoid causing any unnecessary noises.
2. I would like to decide a timeline with you , so during that time i can do the noise causing work and help you to have a peaceful neighbourhood.
I hope this things work out with you too. And once again I sincerely apologise to you for the noise pollution that you had to go through due to my negligence.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely
Mrs. Kathy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd it is creating a lot of noise, which i did not took into consideration priorly...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...reating a lot of noise, which i did not took into consideration priorly. So to overc...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ituation I have listed few points which i am going to implement soon. 1. I wil...
^
Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...would like to decide a timeline with you , so during that time i can do the noise ...
^^
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...timeline with you , so during that time i can do the noise causing work and help ...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou to have a peaceful neighbourhood. I hope this things work out with you too....
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ave a peaceful neighbourhood. I hope this things work out with you too. And once ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60704221322 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0498941574 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148281492799 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624911755994 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416777646619 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674596281145 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451177779463 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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