Some people believe that children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to choose what they want to do in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays modern parents almost have no time for their children. They work hard, sometimes even are absent at home for days or maybe weeks. As the result children have a lot of free time. So the question is should they have a right to organize their free time by themselves or should the parents have to plan their free activity? As for my opinion, I totally agree that children before the secondary school have to have all-planed day by their parents.
First of all, I want to explain my point of view. We live in the Highly Computerized World, where everything is done by computers. Now m...
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Description: The fragment has even child is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace even with adjective
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