In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
In this day and age, people tend to think that in the future, They will choose to read news without over buying traditional newspapers or books to read. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this opinion. There are some reasons to account for this trend.
On the one hand, Because not almost people also have their own phones or IPads to read newspapers online. Some people are in poverty, they do not have enough money to make a purchase phone. So they just able to read printed books to keep themself updated with what is happening around them. Furthermore, as for older generation, they are quite illiterate-technology so they could not the way to use buttons n the keyboard to search news. It is pretty inconvenient for them to keep track of information. For instance, my grandmother, she is frustrated when taking a long times to search a kind of news to read, and finally she no longer using it. Instead of that, she bought newspapers to read.
In addition to that, Using excessive technological equipment like computer or phone cause damage to their eyes and have some adverse effects on their health in mentally and physically. For example, as for children, It make their eyes to be weaken and short-sighted. In terms of the older people, it enables them to be headache or dizzy when keeping constantly their eyes glued to the screen to read.
In conclusion, Although I have to admit that reading online have lots of advantages to people , it does never replace the postition of printed newspapers or books. In the future, those are still popular due to its benefits which have been brought to human life.
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...stition of printed newspapers or books. In the future, those are still popular due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75704225352 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71162471357 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.491515493 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240954350901 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778557987895 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07840587691 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139938018541 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097260953665 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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