You want to study a course in a local collage. You already wrote a letter about the same to the principal of the collage but you have not yet received any reply to your letter.
write letter to the principal. In your letter
- Details of the course
- Why you want to study in that collage only
-request him/her to give early reply
Dear Sir,
My name is Piyush Patel. I am writing this letter in connection with my last communication, regarding course information that I want to peruse in your collage.
I have written you a letter for detail information on "Advance diploma in computer science" course last week but till date I have not received information on that regard. I have competed B.Tech in Computer hardware and it will be fruitful for my career if I acquire Advance diploma as It has great opportunity in the job market.
I searched many collages in last month over internet and I found that your collage is best as compared to other institute. Moreover, my one of friend has completed a same course from this collage and he recommended me as well.
I request you to please provide me detail information at earliest on course fee and required documents as next academic intake is starting from September and only one month left for registration. Furthermore, visa process will also consume one month of time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yous Faithfully,
Piyush
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot received information on that regard. I have competed B.Tech in Computer hardwa...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
...ation on that regard. I have competed B.Tech in Computer hardware and it will be fru...
^^^^
Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stration. Furthermore, visa process will also consume one month of time. I loo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92093339484 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.935982218 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265776975717 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846311389592 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776411255741 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132359362966 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340449511647 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.