It is a fact that language is the one of the most effective methods to connect people across our globe. Due to the dominance of some languages over the others, it has been more and more disappearance of minor languages. Many elderly people argue the extinction of language could lead to culturally devastating consequences. Nevertheless, I do believe that using common languages in communicating has more long-term benefits and point out some further explainations for my stand.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that each country has its own traditions and cultural values, including the native language. The revolution of one language underwent numerous historical events and crisis and hence it has been a distinctively national symbol among cultures in the world. That is the reason why a lot of patriotists assume that using mutual language form means the last era of their country is coming and the later generation would never be taught about the past or ancestors. This is the justification for strongly maintaining a minor language despite the need for integration in our open world.
On the other hand, some particular languages become prominent to tackle a huge loads of problems in various fields. In terms of cultural benefit, official languages has reduced a long distance between individuals such as assisting people in building relationships outside their boundaries and this even could mitigate the risk of war occuring due to misunderstandings. A prime example is when an interpreter has mistakes in translating his president’s meaning and thus exacerbate the hostile relationship between two countries in a territorial negotiation. Another crucial advantage could be seen is that low rate of language conflicting might facilitate foreign companies to corporate with domestic ones and boost the economy of many countries as well. This massive contribution to total national income could be the essential expense on advance of education system which enhance the knowledge of students without their unpopular mother tongues.
In summary, there are a majority of reasons to make my preference for prominent languages as well as mitigate the severe level of language dying out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in summary, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35158501441 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07407570654 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602305475504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7110759793 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240335041204 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798478749853 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433286526895 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150900380528 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215325860173 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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