Techcorporation is our top pick for investment this term. We urge all of our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. That company is Techcorporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not a monopoly. Thus, the new venture of Techcorporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the advice and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the advice.
The author claims that its the right time to invest in Technocorporation for a profitable return in future. The dissatisfaction of people with the current satelite television provider and approval granted to Technocorporation by FTA are the baiis of the argument.However, this argument is based on mainly 3 assumptions and few question must be answered, to increase the persuasiveness of the claim.
To begin, Is Technocorporation looking to enter the Televsion market? Even if its true, Is the quality of service provide by Techcorporation on par with the current service providers?
It is possible that, even after devloping a satelite, the company might now use it for televison market, maybe they will use it for communication, and in that case there is a possiblity that company might not make a profit due to high competitve in communication market.In that case the argument is clearly flawed and the investemnt right now will be a bad choice. Even if they launch in televison market, there is no guarantee that the qualtity of service will be better than the current player in the market. If they do not provide a good enough service, then the consumer may never switch, and the company will not be profitable in that case.
Also the question, "When is Techcorporation going to lauch is service, what is the company timline and business plan for the future" ?, must be answered before making a investment decison. Maybe, even after the approval from the FTA, the company decide the launch it 2 years later due to some other technical issue that must be resolved before the lauch.In that case the company not only looses on opprotunity cost and market share but also there is a possiblity that the new technology will emerge in the mean time, which will make Techcorporation technology obsolete or a new and bigger market player make decide to lauch its own televison service, which can be a company too big, rich or influential to compete against. In both the scenario, Techcorporation will suffer and may not be able to capatilize on the advantage it has right now according to the argument right now.
Also bussiness plan for the company is another important factor before deciding wether it a good investment option. Maybe, the company plan is to expand to rapidly which may not be a vaible option for some markets, or maybe the comapny want to invest a substanitial some of money in marketing,which again can be a bad idea for a market which is not influenced much by advertisment, in both the cases, the company is bound to make a loss in future and therefore not a good investment option right now.
Lastly, the question that should be asked is:"How was the survey done, what was the survey size and assumptions taken" ? Maybe the survey is too small to be applied for a wide market, they might have performed the survey for a single state, and based on the results they have a extrapolated the results for other states, which can give bad result, for say a country like India, which has a higly diverse culture in different state. There is a possibility that people are happy with the service provider in some area of the country and may never change.
Therefore, before deciding if its is good investment option, the author must provide more data about the business plan, assumption and methology followed during the s
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
The author claims that its the right time to invest in Technocorpo...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...chnocorporation for a profitable return in future. The dissatisfaction of people with the...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...on by FTA are the baiis of the argument.However, this argument is based on mainly 3 ass...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'few questions'.
Suggestion: few questions
...nt is based on mainly 3 assumptions and few question must be answered, to increase the persu...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...high competitve in communication market.In that case the argument is clearly flawe...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...will not be profitable in that case. Also the question, 'When is Techcorpora...
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Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...apos; ?, must be answered before making a investment decison. Maybe, even after t...
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Line 6, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... that must be resolved before the lauch.In that case the company not only looses o...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...according to the argument right now. Also bussiness plan for the company is anoth...
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Line 8, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... substanitial some of money in marketing,which again can be a bad idea for a market wh...
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Line 10, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ate, and based on the results they have a extrapolated the results for other stat...
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Line 10, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erent state. There is a possibility that people are happy with the service provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2797.0 2260.96107784 124% => OK
No of words: 571.0 441.139720559 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89842381786 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9539407448 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 204.123752495 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432574430823 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 898.2 705.55239521 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.781913818 57.8364921388 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.8125 119.503703932 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6875 23.324526521 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207040527964 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710037945328 0.0743258471296 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514266906888 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102367293661 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519070897923 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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