The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors:
“Techcorporation is our top pick for investment this term. We urge all of our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. That company is Techcorporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not a monopoly. Thus, the new venture of Techcorporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the advice and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the advice.
The advice given in the newsletter is to invest in the company "Techcorporation" for profitable returns, but a few questions need to be answered in order to determine whether the advice is flawed or not.
Is Techcorporation the only company that has developed satellite technology? The paragraph states that in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA, but what if this is the only company in the last decade that has developed a satellite technology, in that case, receiving an approval by the FTA does not carry as much importance as conveyed through the newsletter.
Does Techcorporation solve the complaints which consumers had in the survey? This is an important point to be analyzed because if "Techcorporation" does not solve the issues which were faced with the previous satellite television provider, then the consumers would not be satisfied with the service and the chances of the company being profitable are unlikely.
What is the cost of shifting from the old satellite provider to the facilities of "Techcorporation"? The cost of transition from the old satellite provider to the one provided by techcorporation is not known, there exists a possibility that the cost is so high that people do not wish to transition and continue using the old service, so this factor plays a major role in determining the success of "Techcorporation".
Is the future predictable and certain? There can be various unlikely situations such as bankruptcy, the company turns out to be a fraud, later it is known that the approval has been taken by bribing the officials of the FTA, the services might even be worse as compared to current satellite television provider, and worst among all, an economic breakdown.
The advice might turn out to be true but if a more detailed analysis on the above questions would be provided, it would incline more people towards investing in this new venture "Techcorporation".
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1593 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.947 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.037 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.182 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.803 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.157 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 322.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2701863354 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98017564385 2.78398813304 143% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496894409938 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.224724994 57.8364921388 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.7 119.503703932 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 23.324526521 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.70786347227 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204592025048 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911905214826 0.0743258471296 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654041648377 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111749517832 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570469351227 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.3550499002 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.