Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning the recent changes in the rubbish collection process in our neighborhood.
My name is Sudheerkumar Motakatla, and I have been staying in suburb Pragathi Nagar ever since I relocated to our beautiful city Hyderabad. Pragathi Nagar has been renowned for its iconic lake.
Lately, I have been informed about our new waste management procedure. As per the upcoming regulations, all residents should dump the wastage from homes in garbage bins, which are placed near the lake. This action would not only pollute the lake and its surroundings but also several health hazard issues could arise for instance more mosquitoes and other insects. Moreover, the park which is adjacent to the lake has been utilizing by the dwellers either to relax in the evenings or for a morning walk. If the rubbish has not cleaned by the municipality staff at regular intervals, then the park would be underutilized.
Considering all these points, I strongly advise the local council to abort the enhancement plans. If these changes are required, it can be continued on the abandoned land near the Church.
I look forward to your swift action on this.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
... the lake and its surroundings but also several health hazard issues could arise for instance ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the abandoned land near the Church. I look forward to your swift action on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1592039801 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80417032973 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686567164179 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6425032258 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105100107361 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366136596807 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365532288511 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533139070216 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513868810113 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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