Employees should give longer holiday to employees to encourage them to do their job well Do you agree or disagree
In this materialistic world, the question arises that director should provide long vacations to workers to promote them for do their job well. I am fully agree with this given nation. I shall discuss my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs
In the first place, there are many benefits of vacations for employees. Firstly every individuals need break which give them energy to develop more ideas for job. Move rover every workers have to spent time with their children and family somemore workers can get appourity to get different skills by travel from foreign companies
Moving further, workers can get different knowledge about work the best illustrates to proof my evidence is that employees can gather information from foreign companies which lead to incline in development rate of companies furthermore communication skills of workers can be increased while they can know how to deal with coustomer.
In conclusion,I think that give vacations is good step to know about purées world moreover employers can get various skills
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Suggestion: agreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, i think, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67354234554 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.490098686 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06120827912 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13543340034 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729504551226 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770426270222 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794434584748 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666544940939 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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