Some people suggest that choosing a field of study for a university degree must be optional while others assume it must be obligational as humankind needs to work more on subjects related to science and technology. In my opinion, everyone should be free to make a decision based on his interest because of the influence of studying a favourable subject on getting better results either the usefulness of each different field on study.
In the first place, there is no doubt about the impact of motivations on every individual. When someone loves something it means that person would pay more energy and time than others. Moreover, we can’t underestimate the effect of motives on people as they help every person to attain the best opportunities. Recent research on students and alumni at GWU revealed that the person who felt interested and satisfied by their major of study at the university perhaps could gain a better condition at the workplace.
On the other hand, each course of study at the university level would be practical as any major at university is not a single discipline but a part of a broad network. Furthermore, a mixture of different studies would allow us to develop as they help each other to expand and make new ways to think. Nowadays, many of best-ranked universities around the globe started to define multidisciplinary courses as they let students know about a wide range of fields due to make a mixture, such as mixing philosophy and car design.
In conclusion, choosing a field of study at university must be optional as it helps pupils to focus on their interests and also each field of study has its’ advantages to spend time on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
...erson to attain the best opportunities. A recent research on students and alumnies at GWU reveale...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...erests and also each field of study has its’ advantages to spend time on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84561403509 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80382713429 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4101204208 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276801781737 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995053385427 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682890982092 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162470981297 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073900705652 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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