In recent decades, music have been more significantly exposed to people all around the world than ever before thanks to the development of social medias. It’s a fact that music can constitute a prevalent means of connection between different cultures and age groups.
It can be seen that language barriers befalls to a majority of people; hence, music is the alternative category for people to join with the others from different places. Albeit the lyrics of songs is difficult to focus due to diverse languages, the melody is linguistically general for people to immerse. Obviously, in order to simply entertain by music, people are not required to intensively have a good grasp of what the contents are. For instance, Asian people are big fans of USUK music although some of them can’t fully understand the context of it. What they love is the abstract patterns of musical sounds, the catchee tunes alongside electrical rhythms. So far, it seems to be the most reliable evidence for the view that: music transcends a rich variety of residents of different cultures.
In addition, music has a great power of arousing a wide range of emotions, from angry to patience, from dreariness to happiness and more noticeably, music is unfettered by the serpentine wisdom. Thus, it binds people with the same feelings as the family regardless their age. Besides, different forms of historical music is passed through generations without being faded and modern music genres are widely spread among the older age groups. So, it is not weird to see people of different generations of a family spend time with others in KTV rooms .
In conclusion, music plays an essential role in mankind being and it have immensely had a substancial impact on the connections between people of different nations as well as ages.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 89
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 89
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73159613073 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.672697443 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29025999248 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103772152181 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373157527308 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171532025531 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314755949532 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.