Do you agree or disagree?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
This is just a misconception that the older people are more happier than the younger generation. Today, the youth are much more satisfiy with their life instead of obvious trend toward modernization. Actually, young people are more happier due to this fast technological changes. There are some reasons which I will elaborate them in the next paragraphs.
First and formost, the technological changes not only make the life easier but also, it make it more funny. There are a lot of intertainments and social activities on the internet our other softwares. Young people are more enjoyed with this kind of intractions. As an instance, my grand father used to talk with some of his friends and neighbors. He told me that he prefer to be alone sometimes because they are boring. They did not have new thing for him. In contrast, my nephew enjoy using social media to make new relationships not only in his city but also around the world. He really enjoy his friendship and they help him to wide his horizental view. So, this change affects on life in a fun way.
Second, in the past going around was difficult for people and most of the old people just stayed in their hometown. Conversly, today, most of the people have opportinity to go around the country or abroad. Traveling around is the result of this fast changes in new era. My grand parents just traveld to two or three cities. But today, every one has a lot of exprience about trips and enjoying time. As a result, younger generation are more satisfy in their life. My brother, who travels alot around the world, has a new world view for himself. This world view help him to be more satisfy about his life. The traveling exprience help him to change his job to the new one which is more funny and he really enjoy it. In the past, older people had a very bised on their world views because they did not know enough about the world.
Finally, traditional bias had play key role for older generation. Traditions are valued and every one had to obey them to satisfy the society. In cantrast, traditional values are not very strong in society nowadays. New generation life style is much more satisfing and they really enjoy it. My grand uncle had to choose a girl who introduce to him by my grand mother. They were not in love and after years they divorced. In contrast, today young poeple choose their couple and they decided about it. If my grand uncle could have his own option, he would had been more happier.
In conclusion, younger generation are much more happier than the olders. Due to the new options for relationships, traveling around and traditional disappearing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...misconception that the older people are more happier than the younger generation. Today, the...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...dernization. Actually, young people are more happier due to this fast technological changes....
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... only make the life easier but also, it make it more funny. There are a lot of inter...
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Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ty but also around the world. He really enjoy his friendship and they help him to wid...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l view. So, this change affects on life in a fun way. Second, in the past going around was ...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...w one which is more funny and he really enjoy it. In the past, older people had a ver...
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Line 4, column 554, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...cle could have his own option, he would had been more happier. In conclusion, you...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... have his own option, he would had been more happier. In conclusion, younger generation ar...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...conclusion, younger generation are much more happier than the olders. Due to the new options...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67456896552 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51226091941 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0152834166 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7272727273 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0606060606 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30303030303 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150505420876 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418484954216 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490197769107 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838358076466 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577315280908 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.