Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution?
In order to become independent, individuals in society search for jobs. Now, elder citizens compete with the young generation for the same jobs. With this in mind, one must ponder the causes behind fewer jobs, and what are the solutions to diminish these challenges. The analysis shows below will address the reasons for such problems and possible solutions in greater detail.
One such reason can be fewer job opportunities available for individuals. To further explain, such results can be due to a less stabilized economy, and not enough projects that can aid in generating thousands of jobs for citizens. For example, the Indian government does not allow foreign investors to build their headquarters in their country which can the reason that it is identified as fewer jobs country. More evidence for this problem can be an overpopulation of the country. This is because overpopulation puts a strain on resources and one of them is fewer jobs.
Be as that it may, solutions exist for the above problems addressed. When considering first the fewer job opportunities, a country should promote their existing country resources such as tourism, and culture. As people will be able to open their small business, resulting in more jobs for people. Now, to resolve resulting overpopulation, awareness should be provided to all the citizens of the nation. To further explain, higher authorities should address the situation in the form of advertisements, and make a rule regarding the family of not more than two children.
In conclusion, the reason behind elder and youngster going for the same jobs in society can be fewer job opportunities and overpopulation. The possible solution to address these problems is promoting their tourism, culture, and addressing the society about the dangers of overpopulation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24827586207 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01317755886 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506896551724 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7999235733 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35332197415 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122088002412 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787260459743 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206896735566 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385086272158 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.