The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compare to the past ,due to advanced technology which can prevent to solve crime. Do you agree or disagree ?
In this Era, Technology has been booming by leaps and bounds ,because of that Modus operandi is changed. The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the previous time owing to, some gizmos, which can prevent and mitigate crime. I partially agree with the given statement.
To embark with, owing to ,some advance gizmos crime rate is declining ,it is more profitable for police to mitigate the crime : CCTV camera ,phone tracker and GPS system . Also people can easy transfer their money one to another account with full security .which is becoming successfully through advanced gizmos. For an example, in India a month ago, government has taken essential decision, lockdown to solve Corona pandemic, those who were breaking lockdown rules, from them fine was taken by police through Dron camera and an e-memos to decline crime rate.
On the other hand ,in previous time crime rate was minimum vis -a'- vis to present time because in past people were not hacking a bank account through laptop and advance gizmos. Advance gizmos were not available in past also youngster are used to with Internet in present era , data through people can know about how to do crime compare in the past , there are some demerits of advance technology. For an example, Crime Patrol -in this reality show record some clips related to crime how to do crime by culprit in various type, due to that people attract to commit crime compare to past.
To conclude ,there are many merits of Advanced technology also demerits nowadays ,while in past due to,less gizmos people had not a attracted to commit a crime .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32185925984 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.94806639 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.16809719585 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112822306623 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263594865175 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703492307948 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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